Looks like I did the inner monologue thing more than once. I don’t really ever do this in the new version.
Indarva was something made up obviously, the world of the old UF was like a mix of ours and another. It’s a bit different now.

Also, I realize now just how racist that eye comment is. I was such an idiot.
You thought I was bad at action scenes NOW?
I gave Orrick a much bigger sword in the new version. Also Wylie’s armblades are simplified a little.
Orrick is actually a lot WORSE at fighting in the new version.
I don’t think Orrick ever matches up to Wylie like this in the new version.
In the new version Haley and Darwin watching a fight wouldn’t really happen since everything undead usually takes place in Asphodelus . I’m not sure how undead were a secret in the old version.
In the old version I made their clothes and accessories change when they reverse. It didn’t make much sense and would be hard to keep track of so I dropped that bit. Also it looks like I was teasing all sorts of possible ships in this.
It’s hard to come across in BW, but all ghosts do have orange glowing eyes. I draw everyone with black eyes now and make them white when they are ghosts or undead.
You might have noticed that in both this and the new version, Orrick seems to blush when a zombie. He’s not actually blushing visibly though. It’s just to convey to the readers his emotions. But for some reason when I do colored pictures where zombie Orrick is blushing I make it green. Because that makes so much more sense.